Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Morning g.a.a.s.g.?

the family jewels





by frank





there was back seat becky


brown


who knew every trucker that


stopped in town


there was odoriforous olga mean


who used to bounce on you like a


trampoline


there was back alley sally


who required a package


the size of cali


there was tiny twat tina bjorn


who required the use of a


shoe horn


there was beer belly holly hall


who%26#039;s name we found


on the bathroom wall


there was pineapple polly


who had a homiciadal boy friend


call for thee


there was floppy buns floe


that was a novelty to know





through all those years


with goggles of beer


i make this ode for all to see


for i love and adore thee





silent butt deadly,





frank

Morning g.a.a.s.g.?
Nice alliteration in this one. The title deceived me a bit, but I%26#039;m glad you took the route you did. Tons of naughty and playful images in this. The rendezvous of a trucker? Great stuff.
Reply:The other day, I read a poem of yours that had %26quot;I fart at thee%26quot; in it, which is a quotation from the first lines of Ben Jonson%26#039;s The Alchemist (1610). I didn%26#039;t have time to answer, and I can%26#039;t find it now, but I wanted to tell you this, in case you didn%26#039;t know. And looking at your questions, I found this poem, that I really like. I find it touching.
Reply:Quite the descriptions but pray tell, what did they have to say about o Frank boy?





A nice flow to your words, aside from the nature of the poem.
Reply:Wow, quite descriptive.


I%26#039;m sure they%26#039;d be proud.


Nice work:)
Reply:Reminds me of something, can%26#039;t recall what...but I will.



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